Summative Self Assesment

Character: 

Brooke

Looks: 

Blonde hair, green eyes, tall, olive skin tone, skinny

Ambition/What she wants to be:

 Zack;s girlfriend

Worst Enenmy:

 The truth

Best friend:

 Jackie

What she carries in her pocket: 

Halls, and a picture of her and her best friend 

Deep Dark Secret: 

She is in love with her best friend’s boy friend

What she lost:

 Her diary which contains her deep dark secret

How I want the reader to feel about Brooke:

 Envious because of her looks, popularity and also intelligent (she’s the full package). Also be sort of dissapointed of her for liking her best friend’s boy, but at the same time feel sorry for her. And lastly be proud of her for facing the truth and being honest.

Plot:

Exposition- Brooke and Jackie are introduced as most popular and pretty girls, setting is deerpath jr. high

Rising Action- Alethia finds out that Brooke is in love with her best friend's boy friend and is ashamed. Plays trick on Brooke by sending roses and a mysterious note

Climax: Brooke gets cut by the roses and her finger turns a rainbow of glowing colors, frightened she feels that she must tell Jackie how she feels. 

Falling Action- Jackie is understanding and forgives Brooke they both decide that neither of them will date Zack.

Resolution- Alethia comes down from the heavens telling Brooke how proud she is of her, Brooke finally understands the message and decides to always be honest with herself and others.

What middle school problem I solved:

Being dishonest with yourself and the person you're supposed to trust the most. I solved it by making Brooke realize that if you are really best friends that they'll forgive you always, and that you must be honest with yourself before you can be with any one else. 

Myth Elements:

My myth was a myth because of some special things I added such as, Alethia the greek goddess coming down and talking to Brooke, Brooke's finger turning different colors when she cut herself with the rose thorn. 

Editing:

I added and took away many over used words and tried to find new ones to fit, I had to fix a lot of run-on sentences, and incorrect punctuation. Also I added more details about my characters.

I think I should get a 4 because I worked through all the steps to get this grade :)